Too formulaic
It just seems to be one hits the other guy, then he retaliates, then the first guy attacks again, etc... Put in a bit more variety in who attacks when.
Other than that, great idea pulled off fairly well. :D
Too formulaic
It just seems to be one hits the other guy, then he retaliates, then the first guy attacks again, etc... Put in a bit more variety in who attacks when.
Other than that, great idea pulled off fairly well. :D
:D!
An epic
This goes right up there with "The Snowman" in terms of artwork and greatness.
It is however, too long, and I can forgive that up to a point, but still too long.
5/5
9/10
I'm 18 and live in the South-East of England. In my spare time I enjoy computering and playing my guitar. Maybe some day I will upload music. Maybe.
Age 35, Male
Student
Canterbuy, UK
Joined on 10/11/06